Skip to main content

Sunderland Then Vs Now Draft 3

 

 
For this final draft, I added music over the top of the entire video. For this I chose music that was approbate from BenSound, which makes it copyright free.

An error that I noticed when watching the first draft was that I had some clips missing half way through, where I had a voiceover in place but just a black screen to accompany it. Because of this I had to find new clips to out over the top. 

Another part that I had to alter was a mistake that I made when talking about the Beatles visiting the Empire. Originally I had made a mistake in the narration by saying that the Beatles performed at the Empire on the "9th of February of 1963 and the 30th of February of the same year" when I was supposed to state that they played on the "9th of February of 1963 and the 30th of November of the same year." Instead of rerecording the whole line again, I simply recorded me saying the word November, cut out the word February from my VoiceOver and placed the new recording where the original track was.

Another part of this draft that differs is because I added a ore relevant thumbnail for the documentary that I created on photoshop.
Labels:

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Draft 3 Feedback and Evaluation

Following my first drafts, I altered certain parts of my documentary to improve it, based on what I thought needed improving, some specific errors that I had originally made that needed correcting, and from feedback from some of my target audience. I collected the same group of five people that had originally watched my first and second draft to gather their opinions of my third and final draft. In comparison to previously, all of my target audience said that they enjoyed watching my documentary (as one person was undecided last time), meaning that the changes that I had made to my documentary were for the better and improved it. When asked if my third and final draft was better than my original two, the results were unanimous and all five participants believed that this draft was certainly the best out of the three. I next asks my participants what made my documentary better in their opinion. In comparison to my first draft, the third draft included way more information, including new...
Post a Comment
Read more

Pre Production Paper Work

Post a Comment
Read more