Draft One Feedback

I created a survey after finishing my first documentary draft to figure out what I could add or change to improve my documentary. I received five responses Forms response chart. Question title: Did you enjoy my documentary?. Number of responses: 5 responses.

Out of the five responses, four said that they enjoyed watching my documentary with only one person being undecided, meaning overall my documentary was well liked and entertaining enough for my desired target audience.

I proceeded to ask those who had watched my documentary what the liked about it, the main consensus was about how informative it was in an entertaining way.

I also asked what critiques they had about my documentary, these included to add more information (as my documentary is still currently quite short and doesn't cover many topics) and to add music. They even gave me examples of more things that I could include such as more of the important industries that provided work for the people of Sunderland, for example the coal mines.

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Draft 3 Feedback and Evaluation

Following my first drafts, I altered certain parts of my documentary to improve it, based on what I thought needed improving, some specific errors that I had originally made that needed correcting, and from feedback from some of my target audience. I collected the same group of five people that had originally watched my first and second draft to gather their opinions of my third and final draft. In comparison to previously, all of my target audience said that they enjoyed watching my documentary (as one person was undecided last time), meaning that the changes that I had made to my documentary were for the better and improved it. When asked if my third and final draft was better than my original two, the results were unanimous and all five participants believed that this draft was certainly the best out of the three. I next asks my participants what made my documentary better in their opinion. In comparison to my first draft, the third draft included way more information, including new...

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Script Sunderland Documentary.pdf from TillyBrown1

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