After watching my original first draft myself and after getting the opinions of others, I realised that there was much more that I could add to my documentary to make it longer and more education for my audience. I used a survey to find out what more I could add that people would want to learn more about. For example, the coal mining industry was a big part of Sunderland and was a part that I had not yet talked about in my first draft. Vaux Brewery was another big business that was a Sunderland name that I had not yet touched on in my documentary. Finally I also added information about Hylton Castle.
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